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Shanna Sukhnanan's avatar

Beautiful poem Chris!

Chris B. Writes's avatar

Thanks Shanna!

Florence Acosta's avatar

I’ve learned his smile can hide infection” carries so much weight. It captures how deeply we learn the people we love, beyond anything that can be Googled or explained. And that ending touches my heart: “His gift, untempered grace. My reward, unfettered intuition.”

Chris B. Writes's avatar

Thank you so much Florence

Althadie Holm's avatar

Intuition is a beautiful gift. As caregivers I believe we are given a triple dose of this by those who watch over all.

Gathering the Pieces of Me's avatar

So beautiful Chris, the ‘grateful steel blue windows’ got me 🥹

Eladio Matos's avatar

Such a beautiful poem, Chris! I love the line "No Googl search teaches the language of my son." That is such a powerful line, my friend.

Chris B. Writes's avatar

Thank you Eladio!

Mandy | Greater Ape's avatar

This is so sweet. I think of my autistic grandson and how he lights up when he sees me because Gama knows the songs he loves and the games he likes to play. Precious, Chris. ♥️

Chris B. Writes's avatar

Awww thanks Mandy! God bless your family

Beka Hicks's avatar

I relate to this so much as my son is autistic and not conversational. It really is an intuition that we have developed as parents.

This is a beautiful poem expressing that in a tender way.

Jess's avatar

This was a great read to start my Monday, thanks Chris!

Chris B. Writes's avatar

Awww thanks Jess!

AsukaHotaru's avatar

People call it instinct because they don’t see the sleepless lessons behind it. I wish you never had to become this fluent, Chris. Then he smiles and all I can think is... yes, of course you know him that well.

Chris B. Writes's avatar

Appreciate you so much, Asuka!

Vicki L Trusselli's avatar

🌹 🌹 beautiful

Chris B. Writes's avatar

Thank you Vicki!

Vicki L Trusselli's avatar

you're welcome 🌹

Human Threads's avatar

A beautiful poem. Thank You 🙏

Chris B. Writes's avatar

Appreciate you!

Hina Gondal's avatar

So beautiful

Linda Olson's avatar

Observation, intuition, intimacy…a different literacy indeed!

Chris B. Writes's avatar

Thank you Linda!

Andrea Thorfinson's avatar

This was so moving, Chris. “No Google search teaches the language of my son” says it all. Through intuition and the extraordinary bond you share, you and Bray have created a language of your own. One found in every change of tone, every smile, and every subtle shift in the energy of the room. This captures so beautifully just how deep intuitive communication can be. Really beautiful, heartfelt poem, thank you for sharing. And welcome to the Gratitude Junkies! 💛

Chris B. Writes's avatar

Thank you so much Andrea, for that invite and the inspiration!

Jeannie Ewing's avatar

Chris, the emotions that surfaced for me when reading today's poem were:

1. quiet awareness

2. exhaustion

3. hidden strength

4. gratitude for small, simple joys

Thank you, Chris, for always sharing your heart with us.

Chris B. Writes's avatar

Thanks so much Jeannie, for always being in my corner and being so thoughtful in how you read and interpret other people’s work. You are spot on here!

Jeannie Ewing's avatar

Of course! Looking forward to chatting with you next week! :)

Monica A Leyva's avatar

Chris, this poem reveals something profound: intuition is rarely magic. It is attention refined by love. Every sleepless night, every difficult decision, every moment spent learning Bray's unique language became another layer of understanding until what others call instinct simply became fluency.

The closing image of "grateful steel-blue windows" is especially beautiful. Sometimes gratitude doesn't explain the mystery; it simply lets us see it more clearly.

Thank you for sharing both your heart and your journey.

We are thrilled you joined the group, Monica

Chris B. Writes's avatar

Hi Monica! It’s been so amazing getting to cross paths and collaborate with you more and more. Thank you for seeing through to the heart of the poem. Truly appreciate you!

Monica A Leyva's avatar

🫶